This is my first attempt at a erotic short story(Clearly) please leave me some constructive criticism so that I can in prove my stories thanks J
. As she used up the last of her strength she lay there pathetically, her head to the side in the dust of the building this was when josh noticed the single tear rolling down her check, Brad was going to a penny chainsawing in and out of the girl a small smear of blood had developed on his penis “she’s a fucking virgin” said Brad “well not anymore” he chuckled at his own joke, Josh was less impressed.
European. A few teenage girls were dunked rather forcefully, causing them to scream, following which they were dunked again. Thankfully for her, Dan had the sense to withdraw, but even he could feel a difference in her body odor
This is my first attempt at a erotic short story(Clearly) please leave me some constructive criticism so that I can in prove my stories thanks J
. As she used up the last of her strength she lay there pathetically, her head to the side in the dust of the building this was when josh noticed the single tear rolling down her check, Brad was going to a penny chainsawing in and out of the girl a small smear of blood had developed on his penis “she’s a fucking virgin” said Brad “well not anymore” he chuckled at his own joke, Josh was less impressed.
European. A few teenage girls were dunked rather forcefully, causing them to scream, following which they were dunked again. Thankfully for her, Dan had the sense to withdraw, but even he could feel a difference in her body odor
This is my first attempt at a erotic short story(Clearly) please leave me some constructive criticism so that I can in prove my stories thanks J
. As she used up the last of her strength she lay there pathetically, her head to the side in the dust of the building this was when josh noticed the single tear rolling down her check, Brad was going to a penny chainsawing in and out of the girl a small smear of blood had developed on his penis “she’s a fucking virgin” said Brad “well not anymore” he chuckled at his own joke, Josh was less impressed.
European. A few teenage girls were dunked rather forcefully, causing them to scream, following which they were dunked again. Thankfully for her, Dan had the sense to withdraw, but even he could feel a difference in her body odor
