This is my first attempt at a erotic short story(Clearly) please leave me some constructive criticism so that I can in prove my stories thanks J
Brunette. Josh was at a loss what had he just done assisting in raping an Iraqi national and the murder of a united states marine, the seconds turned to mintes the Josh said in Arabic “we need to go” the girl pulled her ropes over to cover herself they left in silence leaving Brad’s body to rot in the dust.
. "Waiting to catch a glimsp of my sister.
This is my first attempt at a erotic short story(Clearly) please leave me some constructive criticism so that I can in prove my stories thanks J
Brunette. Josh was at a loss what had he just done assisting in raping an Iraqi national and the murder of a united states marine, the seconds turned to mintes the Josh said in Arabic “we need to go” the girl pulled her ropes over to cover herself they left in silence leaving Brad’s body to rot in the dust.
. "Waiting to catch a glimsp of my sister.
This is my first attempt at a erotic short story(Clearly) please leave me some constructive criticism so that I can in prove my stories thanks J
Brunette. Josh was at a loss what had he just done assisting in raping an Iraqi national and the murder of a united states marine, the seconds turned to mintes the Josh said in Arabic “we need to go” the girl pulled her ropes over to cover herself they left in silence leaving Brad’s body to rot in the dust.
. "Waiting to catch a glimsp of my sister.
