This is my first story so tell me where I go wrong please I know my spelling is bad and my grammar is non-existent but tell me if the story line is realistic or not
It was late summer 1989 school was starting in a week and the weather man had just forested a heat wave
Hairy Slim. .
. He grasped the weapon firmly in both hands, swung it up over his head, then brought it straight down, the flat side smacking hard against her fully rounded, bikini decorated ass cheeks. His head had a few scraggly hairs on it and his clothes were very shabby and filthy
This is my first story so tell me where I go wrong please I know my spelling is bad and my grammar is non-existent but tell me if the story line is realistic or not
It was late summer 1989 school was starting in a week and the weather man had just forested a heat wave
Hairy Slim. .
. He grasped the weapon firmly in both hands, swung it up over his head, then brought it straight down, the flat side smacking hard against her fully rounded, bikini decorated ass cheeks. His head had a few scraggly hairs on it and his clothes were very shabby and filthy
This is my first story so tell me where I go wrong please I know my spelling is bad and my grammar is non-existent but tell me if the story line is realistic or not
It was late summer 1989 school was starting in a week and the weather man had just forested a heat wave
Hairy Slim. .
. He grasped the weapon firmly in both hands, swung it up over his head, then brought it straight down, the flat side smacking hard against her fully rounded, bikini decorated ass cheeks. His head had a few scraggly hairs on it and his clothes were very shabby and filthy